![]() The author writes this character so strikingly, it's a shame to me she couldn't write him a supporting story. There were times I was reading this story I kept asking myself why I was trying so hard to get into it instead of treating it as blase reading and then there would be a Mayne scene. They are who I wanted to read about darn it! It got so bad for me I actually skipped the chapters that didn't pertain to Josie and Garrett. I would be just fully immersing myself into Josie and Garrett's story and then would be rudely jerked out of their story into the other couple. ![]() The author dedicates whole chapters to the secondary couple and alternates the two stories. ![]() I became so incredibly annoyed with how the author gave dual top billing with what is suppose to be our main couple and a secondary couple, Garrett's sister who appears in previous books and the guy who starts a nasty nickname for Josie, The Scottish Sausage. This scene just made me smile because I could totally tell it was a precursor for things to come. This story begins for me when Garrett and Josie get tipsy in the Starlight room in his house and he gets her to shed her corset. So anyway I really wish it would stop being mentioned how much older Garrett is than Josie because it makes me feel icky with how much older he is than Josie. ![]() Just like the book before this one it again took until chapter seven for me to get into this story. ![]()
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